Thursday, 18 June 2015

Which SMARTPHONE will we convince you to buy?

Year 5 have also been considering what their ideal SMARTPHONE would be like. After critiquing ads from various Smartphone companies such as Apple iPhone and the Samsung Galaxy they have now created their very own SMARTPHONE video advertisements.

Before creating their ads the students viewed and discussed some typical ads for modern smartphones as Mentor Texts to identify :
  • Some of the features of smartphones and also the techniques used by the advertisers to promote their product. These included: 
  • Use of persuasive language ; 
  • Use of descriptive and technical language; 
  • Matching of images and text; 
  • Use of visual codes such as the use of colour; offers and demands; 
  • Making smooth and consistent visual transitions within  ads. 
In creating their own ads the students:
  • Wrote scripts and created storyboards and then proceeded to learn to use the full iMovie (not iMovie Trailer) for the first time. 
  • Learnt how to locate and attribute creative commons images
  • Created graphic content including original photos and movies 
  • Included credits and image attributions (Unfortunately most of these credits have been removed for privacy reasons as some contained full student names - a lesson for next time!)
  • Critiqued one another's ads, giving descriptive feedback & sharing ideas and techniques to help each other make the best possible ads they could 

 Below are some of our students' advertisements in a Playlist. We invite you to preview our ads to see which ones are the most convincing or the most creative perhaps.

Please share your comments about which is the best Smartphone ad and why you think so. We look forward to hearing from you.

Year 5 Crowd Sourced Book Recommendations

Check out the latest Book Recommendations from Mrs Gatt's Year 5 class. We crowd sourced this collection from our classroom and each created a slide for sharing.
Watch this space for some more recommendations from Mrs Young's class - coming soon!

Hello World _ Welcome to our Year 5 Blog

We would like to introduce you to our Year 5 Blog at Chisholm Catholic Primary School at Bligh Park - a suburb in the Hawkesbury District in Sydney's North West. Mr Galea and the students have started this blog so we can all share our work together with our families and the Chisholm Community. In our class we are part of  the iLearn Program and so we all have our own iPads for learning in school and we even get to take them home each day too. We hope you will enjoy seeing our work and invite you to give us feedback too.